tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7767279317261645043.post9041488495986119020..comments2022-07-02T08:55:49.862-07:00Comments on Wei's Life in Island: Cover LetterZhuang Weihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11403095571436166886noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7767279317261645043.post-47967849341682869282012-09-25T03:49:39.278-07:002012-09-25T03:49:39.278-07:00I forgot to click on the reply button. Please see ...I forgot to click on the reply button. Please see my reply following. :-0Zhuang Weihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11403095571436166886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7767279317261645043.post-84251641542184248322012-09-25T03:47:44.325-07:002012-09-25T03:47:44.325-07:00Hi Maxime! Your comments are really encouraging! T...Hi Maxime! Your comments are really encouraging! Thanks a lot.<br />As the project details I have already included in my resume, I do not know whether it is a repeat if I mention that in the cover letter. Also, I do not really like my experience, as they do not really stand me out from the rest. Hence I am hoping that I can do more things in the future to make my cover letter a better one. :-)Zhuang Weihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11403095571436166886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7767279317261645043.post-19511399127612119482012-09-19T00:24:54.341-07:002012-09-19T00:24:54.341-07:00Hi Zhuang Wei !
That is a good cover letter!
Fo...Hi Zhuang Wei !<br /><br />That is a good cover letter! <br /><br />For your information a, it is good. You just should add your phone number and your email address but I understand that you don't add them on this post (indeed we have to be careful with the information that we spread on Internet).<br /><br />Paragraph 1 : OK, you say why you write this cover letter! Concise, precise, it is OK !<br /><br />Paragraph 2 : You explain that you have the skills and the experience for the education, good!<br /><br />Paragraph 3 : You show that you have communication and management qualities and that you are an open-minded person with no adaptation problems. You say that you have participated in many projects. I think that you can give a more precise example where you participation was really important. You can also explain the role that you had int his project.<br /><br />Paragraph 4 : Same thing, you could develop one of your internship experience which proves what you say.<br /><br />Paragraph 5 : Really good conclusion!<br /><br />Global feeling : Good cover letter, we see that you have a lot of experience, skills and qualities. You could be more precise.<br /><br />Good language, good structure!Maxime Fugelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02383949690605318765noreply@blogger.com